I picked this quote because it summerizes all of what I think about my family, and since my home has been the one providing and holding us together, I always have a very special feeling about being at home all the time.
The ideas of fitting in my new ideas is by making a transitional paragraph following up on my family parties that happen all the time. I will include the song that I had mentioned on number 2, I would make a scene where we are listening to that song and how we are all enjoying it. Another idea that I had mentioned before was to include a quote at the beginning of my paper because this will make my essay more fluent and straight to the point instead of heading the reader towards a different direction. I think that this quote will make sense when I start talking about my family and what it means to me.
Dancing runs in the family its something that both me and my whole family have. We share the joy of dancing and having fun with whatever steps we could make up. Sometimes we also have dance competitions with each other, wether its the little kids against the big kids or the moms against the kids, its just a great way of expressing ourselves and how much we are having fun with each other.
The songs that we like the most dancing to is mexican banda and duranguense, it's always fun and entertainning seeing my cousins dance and especially when my auntes get crazy and start dancing like us as well.
Music is something that gives emotions and sentimental value to anbody that hears it, not only does it make people have a smile on their face but they can also bring people together as well. Once we have the family parties of course we have to dance and joke around with each other, which I love doing.
I could push these ideas into my writing by incorperating them where I explain how I have fun with my family and the many things that we laugh about. Not ecerything is about talking to each other about our life and other boring things like this, it's also sometimes about laughing at each other and enjoy being together as much as we can.
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